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When 268 Words Made Presidential Poetry

 

(This post appeared earlier this year, on Abraham Lincoln's birthday. I am re-posting it, with minor revisions, in celebration of the anniversary of the Gettysburg Address, which Lincoln delivered 149 years ago today.)

When my children were younger, I had a ritual on Abraham Lincoln’s birthday: I would play a recording of Sam Waterston reciting the Gettysburg Address for them before they left for school. As Lincoln’s words competed with Cheerios and orange juice for their attention, I hoped my kids would come to love those words as I do – for what they say and, especially, for how they say it.

There are only 268 words in the address – a mere ten sentences – but what profound poetry they make! As an English major in college, I was surprised to find the speech in my Norton Anthology of American Literature, right there with works by Emerson and Hawthorne, Whitman and Poe. Lincoln, the writer? But that was my tip-off. For the first time, I read the Gettysburg Address as a piece of literature, and have been re-reading it ever since.

The words are Lincoln’s own. No speechwriter submitted drafts to him or fine-tuned the phrasing on the train to Gettysburg the day before. The main speaker at the cemetery dedication was Edward Everett, former U.S. Secretary of State and Governor of Massachusetts. Lincoln followed. There is no photo of him delivering his “remarks,” as they were called, because they were so brief. My favorite line in the speech is "The world will little note, nor long remember what we say here, but it can never forget what they did here." Thanks, in part, to Lincoln's words, we do not forget.

Witnesses reported that Everett’s speech, much longer than Lincoln's, was better received. But shortly afterward, the noted orator wrote to the president: “I should be glad if I could flatter myself that I came as near to the central idea of the occasion, in two hours, as you did in two minutes.”

In those two minutes, Lincoln proved what Shakespeare had written in Hamlet two and a half centuries before: “Brevity is the soul of wit.”

 

Leave RI

4:52 pm on Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Excellent words and a very succinct speech. Those days are gone except for FDR's "infamy" speech. From then on the only way Presidential speeches have "moved" me could best be served by turning the last thirty years into a roll of Scotty.
Mr. Walsh..I thank you

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John Walsh

8:39 am on Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Hah! Thanks for reading and commenting.

In41time

8:04 am on Wednesday, November 21, 2012

The Gettysburg Address reminds me 8th grade where we were all to commit it to memory and deliver it on the stage to the whole school back at Our Lady of Mercy in EG. I didn't care for the speech then as I had a bad case of stage fright. But I never forgot the speech's words and upon visiting Gettysbury this past year and standing in the Gettysburg National Cemetary not far from where Lincoln originally delivered the speech I came to a clear understanding of the words and it sent a chill through me.

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John Walsh

8:52 am on Wednesday, November 21, 2012

I've never been to Gettysburg, but would love to get there someday. My path to the speech was paved by a great American history teacher in college and The Civil War series by Ken Burns. Then my knowledge was deepened by Gary Wills' great book "Lincoln at Gettysburg": http://amzn.to/QuAfXd. Thanks for reading and commenting!

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Leave RI

12:46 am on Friday, November 23, 2012

John,
I went there about 20 years ago. There used to be a tower with glass windows that had the different battlefields etched (much like the Prudential in Boston)..I think they have since taken it down..it should be on any history geeks bucket list.

In41time

10:45 pm on Wednesday, November 21, 2012

My advice is plan for a trip to Gettysburg ASAP. It is a wonderful experience and allows you to truly visualize the horror of the Civil War but also helps you realize the sacrifices made to keep the union of the United States of America in tact. The battlefield is astounding and the National Parl Service is doing great work to restore it to how it was in 1863. Next July is the 150th anniversary of the battle so beware that Gettysburg will be completely inundated with visitors at that time. The estimatated number of vistors expected in 2013 are in the 2-3 million range. million. Thanks for the article.

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John Walsh

8:53 am on Saturday, November 24, 2012

Thanks for the info. Looking forward to making the pilgrimage.

English first

2:09 pm on Friday, November 23, 2012

Any where in Pennsylvania and Virginia is full of history.

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